Too Fine For One Woman Poem by Doris Cornago

Too Fine For One Woman

Rating: 5.0


Redundant, redundancy, but the chorus goes on

We hate, we love - alternately but with consistency

We laugh, we cry - but always with the same reason

Remembering, remembrance, all these in abundance...


Are you happy? Your dad asks me in concern one morning

He is a good man and I envy him his son but wondering

Why the question - should I feel the suggested meaning

The son is indeed a fine man, too fine for one woman...


Laughing, laughter, alone mostly, but I must carry on

We doubt, we believe - but in the end, one recourse

Not to dismantle but to prop up, hold tight, cleave

Thinking, thoughts - but always with you as the reason.

Too Fine For One Woman
Saturday, December 7, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: fathers,parents,rating
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
What is a woman for a man? That is the crux of a woman's dilemma. Her situation requires a choice between options that are or seem equally unfavorable or mutually exclusive If she can make her mind up of what she wants to be or decide a course of action, then her problem should be resolved. But she cannot - and all she amounts to is redundancy.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
deborrahcornago 10 March 2018

Thank you fro reading this poem and understanding the intentions. :)

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Lyn Paul 08 December 2013

Wonderful words Doris, producing smiles. let us all take note of your final line. Thank you

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