Julius Victorio

Rookie (15 August 1993 / North Middlesex Hospital)

Torn Apart


Many a year ago, there was one
And that one grew to few
And that few to many
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  • Rookie Mikayla Carpenter (6/19/2009 10:02:00 AM)

    This poem is very wonderful: ]
    Keeps me wondering.
    Very nicely written.
    Let me know when you write more. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 5,558 Points Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black (10/24/2008 6:34:00 PM)

    That's quite a portrayal of how society works.Anyone innovative is ostrasized and anyone rebellious succeeds in taking over or are killed.If you get a chance please read my poem and rate it.It's called the Bugs Of Nature's Economic Picture and it's about social -economic strata.Welcome to PoemHunter and I accept your hand of friendship.If you have problems with spelling.puctuation and definitions or anything else that has to do with words you can get your answers on the internet just type the word in the search bar..And I find Wikipedia to be very helpful.A ten from me and my best wishes. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Karina Shenaz Nanuck-robertson (10/19/2008 6:45:00 AM)

    N.I.C.E! Good one Julius! Keep up the great work! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Karima Astrid P (10/16/2008 2:41:00 AM)

    nicely penned...
    great poem... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sherice Malcolm (10/15/2008 1:35:00 PM)

    Oh wow this is amazing Jul
    Great Poem! (Report) Reply

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