Tornado Poem by jeremiah shine

Tornado

Rating: 5.0


The sky has become a swamp cooler
over this swampy town.
Thunder rocks the roof
and lightning lights the sky!
My loved ones have forsaken me
for ill
or for good,
I don't know.
Meanwhile, I suffer...
(they don't) .
Humans don't live in the High Desert.
Citizens do.
The sky has become a swamp cooler!
And the sirens accompany
'Sex in the City'
as Liberty fades.
Bring the tornado!
Knock it down.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sarwar Chowdhury 22 July 2009

fine thoughts, fine looked at the fact, finely penned..10+

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Ency Bearis 21 July 2009

a wonderful imagery write and effects well implied...nice poem....10

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