Samanyan Lakshminarayanan


# Toss - 3 Liner - Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

a coin tossed up
to know what is my future
god held it up there


Comments about # Toss - 3 Liner by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

  • Freshman - 797 Points Louis Rams (9/13/2009 4:53:00 PM)

    GOD held the coin, because it was
    and always will be his decision to make.

    a ten (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 114 Points Joseph Poewhit (9/7/2009 5:27:00 PM)

    The sun stood still one day (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 399 Points Almedia Knight-Oliver (9/7/2009 11:40:00 AM)

    Great philosophy of the future of life or the hereafter. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sarwar Chowdhury (8/30/2009 8:21:00 AM)

    hehehe hats off to you!
    great tolstoy which depicted in the 'war and peace' you said in just 3 lines!
    101010101010+ (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,440 Points Marieta Maglas (8/30/2009 6:08:00 AM)

    Sometimes it is difficult to understand God's will, or maybe He gives us the permission to decide for ourselves.Great poem......................10+++++++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 120 Points Maia Padua (8/28/2009 8:14:00 AM)

    you really have great and fruitful thoughts
    so unique..
    this is great..I am touched by this...
    makes me ponder on life...on my life
    thanks for sharing
    10+++

    Lovelots,

    Maia (Report) Reply

  • Rookie ~ Jon London ~ (8/28/2009 6:16:00 AM)

    Who knows what destiny lay ahead...only the greatness from above shall carry us......Your faith shines through in this Sam...well penned (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 356 Points C. P. Sharma (8/26/2009 9:18:00 AM)

    Either way you are a winner, your offering has been accepted.
    CP (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Deepti Agarwal (8/26/2009 2:07:00 AM)

    It ws good that God held it up.. coz our future cannot be decided by a coin... :)

    its something which will happen the way it is supposed to happen :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 23 Points Rajaram Ramachandran (8/25/2009 7:13:00 PM)

    This shows that God, not the coin, is the judge to decide our future based on our day to day performances. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Carol Gall (8/25/2009 10:41:00 AM)

    excellence in this one 10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Rakesh Bedi (8/25/2009 12:38:00 AM)

    Something unique; a class in itself, sam! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 1 Points Sandra Martyres (8/25/2009 12:29:00 AM)

    This one is brilliant Samanyan.....a well composed Senryu poem.10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Catrina Heart (8/25/2009 12:17:00 AM)

    What a dazzling creative mind you have Sam..................10/10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, August 25, 2009

Poem Edited: Sunday, September 20, 2009


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