~total Eclipse~ Poem by Sinnaminsun Sinnaminsun

~total Eclipse~

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Three years gone by
as night wraps up
all her silver tight,

Spreading far as darkness holds
glows a crimson,
amber light...

Escapes my mind
as eyes look on,
this lunar sphere surrounds

And pulls me up
above as stars,
look down on golden ground.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jimi Doyle 07 March 2007

wow...excellent job! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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