Total Failure Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Total Failure

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I never thought of myself
But boosted with treasure of shelf
Also talked of so much wisdom
That was held seldom

“No one is intelligent” I thought and felt proud
Many times I spoke so loud
People heard me and laughed
No one responded with a word

I was called stupid
Yet I tried for no lid
Why people threw insult?
What was really seen in me as inbuilt?

Was it arrogance?
I said no
Was it just jealousy on their part?
I did not agree

They knew I was good by nature
But some thing was seen as failure
I used to speak at wrong time
It was wrong place too sometimes

I used to offer charity
But may speak with few words of pity
People always used to get offended
Thus my good reputation was ended

I have no way to learn
I remain always same
It is possible in future
But today I am total failure

Tuesday, March 18, 2014
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 March 2014

I never thought of myself But boosted with treasure of shelf Also talked of so much wisdom

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Savita Tyagi 18 March 2014

Your modesty is great and so are your thoughts.

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Savita Tyagi 18 March 2014

Your modesty is great and so are your thoughts.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 March 2014

Les Bush Poet likes this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome 7 minutes ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 March 2014

WELCOME ROHANI DAUD a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 March 2014

Mohan Lohani Arrogance and jealousy are both negative attributes and manifest themselves under various circumstances. about an hour ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 March 2014

welcome agam vora a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 March 2014

good Lena Logie4 minutes ago :) Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 March 2014

good poem Walter Jason4 minutes ago good poem

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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