Total Submission Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Total Submission



Total submission

Sing me a song, lovely lady
I am lost already
Not with your beauty
Or body looking healthy

It was from the beginning
Your face was shining
I was amazed at skill you had
The rumors too were fed

Not that I dreamed in day time
But had thought number of times
It was simple question of acceptance
This was only thing that was keeping me tense

"Hello dear" I head someone's suppressed voice
I turned back to witness without choice
As she was fully ridden in my heart
I always heard her saying and felt as inseparable part

Why don't you send proposal? She was slowly uttering
I doubted the signal as she was reiterating
I smiled back with total submission
It was not felt as guilt's admission

Total Submission
Monday, January 25, 2016
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 January 2016

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 January 2016

Why don’t you send proposal? She was slowly uttering I doubted the signal as she was reiterating I smiled back with total submission It was not felt as guilt’s admission

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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