Touch Me- Dusk Poem by Gautami Phookan

Touch Me- Dusk

Rating: 5.0


I walk
through the woods
swirling whiteness,
thick blanket of mist;
cold, it touches my skin.
my fingers reach out to feel
the delicate white petals wrapped
oh! so fragile, white bunches in green;
smell sweet , the wild lilies - of - the - valley.

I pick some flowers, a sound startles me,
forest with its tall dark trees scary.
a rustle behind me, I see
a deer leaps across my path
fades in the thickets green.
hear trees whispering
frozen I stood.
been touched by
the dark
woods.


(Form: Etheree)

Tuesday, April 15, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: woods
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Georgios Venetopoulos 25 April 2014

I am reading it again. The language and syntax used was very intriguing, together with the unfinished element of suspense. Great architecture of words and meanings and all that by our Gautami. :)

0 0 Reply
Georgios Venetopoulos 21 April 2014

Very well written etheree; the talent of gautami is for one more time evident. :) G.

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success