! Touch Me Not ! Poem by GAYATRI NAMBIAR

! Touch Me Not !

Rating: 2.8


I find a song ends in one
touch me not on a rain
filled summer noon day
I collected its dried violet
flowers and filled in one
sea shell and floated near
the confluence of three
oceans and there from
the depth of ocean
a new song emerged,
a touch me not song...




May 27, 2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vinod Ak 29 May 2009

an innovative format of poetry! very sweet!

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Joseph Poewhit 29 May 2009

Must be some song from the ocean depths.

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Mithali Vasudev 29 May 2009

Song of nature is always better than human outbursts, see here people write of bombs and explosions as their regular mission, impossible to deal and read such claims. Good gayatri, Nature gave us only beauty but humans distort it beyond recognition. good 10++

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