Traitor Poem by Rachel Butler

Traitor

Rating: 4.5


(Dedicated to the unknown gardener)

Adieu, a lingering adieu, he brings effete
aspirations.
Conveying words cached by flowerets,
face circumscribed by crimson glow.

Approached a great hoarfrost, a slaughtering cold,
Unfolding falsehoods begat unfolding falsehoods,
as a ripened fruit falls trodden under foot by dogs.

Yelps, cries, fretting a traitors folly,
”Adieu” brevity of good amongst his capers,
by his own actions a cruel end was cut.

He walks in eternal shadows with no voice.

Sparrow

Monday, October 24, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sean Hill 20 January 2012

Sounds like the Anti Christ :) i really like the pronoun effect here.

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