Transient Beauty Poem by Marieta Maglas

Transient Beauty

Rating: 5.0


In the mirror of her eyes~
all the hues of the edelweiss,
a shining star for one night.

Poem by Marieta Maglas

Transient Beauty
Sunday, July 19, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: beauty,mirror,night,star
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Feldman 19 July 2020

The beauty and delicacy of this poem, transcends the written word and so delicately reaches the spirit. Just enchanting! Merci bien, Madame.

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Rajendran muthiah 20 July 2020

The flowery plant , edelweiss has a short span of life. So its colors reflected from the eyes too.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 13 August 2020

Wow a brilliant poem reflecting the stars in eyes so poetically wow. Great in brevity. Kudos! Plz do read and comment your thoughts on my newest prose titled, " face veils/face masks same thing " as it fosters an understanding of the shared veiling practice btw east and west since history.

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Linda Bella Wassermeister 30 October 2021

Very nice. Short and sweet!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 30 October 2021

True naturalist (not surrealist) painting added, most beautiful expression in her face. Fantastic painter.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 30 October 2021

This is poem sublimest, dear Marieta! Happiest to 'see' you here now, Truly very happy am I since PF. Have I said EXCELLENT POEM? 5 Stars and to my Favourites

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Mystic Indian 24 October 2021

deep and profound. thank you for your expression.

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Suresh Kumar Ek 13 September 2020

make it a shining star for all the nights

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Marieta Maglas

Marieta Maglas

Radauti, Judet Suceava, Romania
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