Trap Bait's Boon Is To....Attract Poem by Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Trap Bait's Boon Is To....Attract

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Availing itself dangling, is the bait
Trap-walls, whilst ensemble to entrap
Trapdoor is counting down to fall
Reading impulses trigger waits for
Allured preordained message, that
Crazed mindset stealthily walks in
To the ecstasy of the tracker, behind the vista

Trap Bait's Boon Is To....Attract
Saturday, August 27, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: tragic,attraction,cheating,greed,passion
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Inspired by Haiku 3 - Poem by Muhammad Jahoorul Islam
Cartoon illustration: curtsy internet
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jayatissa K. Liyanage 29 August 2016

Thanks for the comment. Yes, I shall read it and come back.

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Sasanka Sekhar Panda 29 August 2016

Crazy mindset is trapped in its own follies. Excellent Mr. Liyanage. Please read my recent poem The Ultimate.

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 August 2016

Allured! ! With the pleasures of life. Thanks for sharing.

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Thank you Edward for reading mine.

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Kelly Kurt 28 August 2016

Human nature often victimizes itself

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Exactly, Kelly. Thank you for the comment.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Jayatissa K. Liyanage

Walasmulla, Sri Lanka
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