Trapped Poem by Nicola Forde

Trapped

Rating: 5.0


Sitting in a open room,
Yet feeling so closed inside,
Claustrophobic,
It’s getting harder to breathe.

His face like stone as he enters,
Giving her a look that sends her stomach in turmoil,
Her gaze remaining on his face, waiting for a sign,
Something to tell her he cared.

Her mind wanders to better days,
Happier days, Peaceful times,
When those withering looks and glares,
Short answers and clipped remarks
Ceased to exist.

He turns away,
Proceeding to take off his jacket,
Her face a picture of grief.



Nicola Forde - 11/04/2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
~ Jon London ~ 11 April 2009

Another fine piece, you've captured a moment on a painful subject that many find hard putting into words, you've done well here. Top marks 10+

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