William Stafford

(January 17, 1914 – August 28, 1993 / Kansas)

Traveling Through The Dark - Poem by William Stafford

Traveling through the dark I found a deer
dead on the edge of the Wilson River road.
It is usually best to roll them into the canyon:
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Comments about Traveling Through The Dark by William Stafford

  • Rookie - 100 Points Nicholas Campbell (10/23/2014 1:21:00 PM)

    Someone online, I thought it here at Poem Hunter, remarked that the whole premise of the poem is false, because, he wrote, the unborn deer lay in its mother dead more than three hours. Stafford didn't say that in the poem: he said a recent kill, and that may mean very recent; the deer was still warm! You stand corrected, whomever you are. Nick Campbell (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 6 Points Dawn Fuzan (5/11/2014 8:06:00 AM)

    Realy good poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 169 Points Brian Jani (5/9/2014 9:29:00 AM)

    Wow, I like this one (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,488 Points Francis Lynch (2/17/2014 5:09:00 PM)

    You want to read an amazing poem on the same topic? David, by Earl Birney. Long narrative poem by one of Canada's (and the world's) great modern poets. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,552 Points Paul Reed (2/17/2014 4:46:00 AM)

    Heart-rendign and poignant (Report) Reply

  • Rookie John Mcdonald (11/29/2012 12:29:00 AM)

    I think the man made the right decision in not saving the unborn deer, had he saved it, it would have died of starvation and dehydration and so what he really did was save the deer from a brief painful life. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kadeja Bailey (1/24/2010 10:27:00 AM)

    the speaker is having a moral dilema the poem is about nature and death and the sadness that comes with it (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Candace Johnson (10/14/2009 1:39:00 PM)

    That is sooo sad. Why couldn't he save it? ? (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Carolyn Dimmick (9/6/2008 12:41:00 PM)

    It is very well written, but very sad. Were it I, I would have saved the yet unborn (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Nick Capozzoli (8/1/2007 1:28:00 AM)

    It is technically not a sonnet as regards either line number or rhyme scheme, but it has the feel of a sonnet and is a very good poem. The rhythm of the five-beat line and the images are masterful. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Charley P (6/18/2007 1:44:00 PM)

    It's a poignant poem but you're right, its not a sonnet. I like it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie E F (8/30/2006 4:28:00 PM)

    A sad poignant moment. A live being lives on beyond and then dies. Almost unbearable (Report) Reply

  • Rookie David Rogers (4/4/2006 2:18:00 PM)

    Dude, it's not a sonnet. Sonnets have fourteen lines. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Greg Hutchinson (9/18/2005 1:51:00 AM)

    This is a very fine sonnet. Its 7 out of 10 'user rating' is a reflection on the readers, not the poem. I wonder how many readers even recognized that it is a sonnet. The half-rhymes and loose iambic give it a prosy surface without sacrificing the rhythm, which is perfect. Take the last line: 'Then pushed her over the edge into the river, ' exactly echoes the sense - with the first cluster of stressed syllables suggesting the pushing and the last, rushing syllables suggesting the release and fall.

    By the way, I wonder why the order to choose a number wasn't accompanied by any number. I couldn't vote! I'd have given it a 10. (Report) Reply










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