hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 37,749 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Tree Bears Fruit - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

Tree bears fruit
After hard efforts
It comes in long way
To enjoy with happiness in any way

Many factors combine
Add color to make it divine
Mother earth feeds the line
The plant has grown up to define

The fruits and flowers adore
We need to watch and explore
Take the fruits out for use
That is the main line to choose

Enjoy the outcome
Of hard labor and welcome
This is life and return is seen
Life never creates ugly scene


Comments about Tree Bears Fruit by hasmukh amathalal

  • Gold Star - 37,749 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/21/2014 9:12:00 PM)

    welcome mericel remirez
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  • Gold Star - 37,749 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/21/2014 9:00:00 PM)

    21 hours ago « Delete » hussain smelter no words to comment, the way you describe.every aspect of life, words flow like the sweet sounds of water of a natural spring, be blessed, long LIFE with complete HEALTH (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 37,749 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/21/2014 8:59:00 PM)

    surekha.[ mem.. Life never creates ugly scene superb sir no words to thank you sir (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 37,749 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/21/2014 6:22:00 AM)

    A romantic poem. Creates a good picture in he mind


    Zik Badewole6 minutes ago
    Thanks for a job well done. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 37,749 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/21/2014 6:10:00 AM)

    good poem


    Renee Haddix6 minutes ago
    Mother earth is so beautiful, vibrant and terrifying. Use more emotion.... besides that. I thought it was good ;)
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  • Gold Star - 37,749 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/21/2014 6:10:00 AM)

    good


    Bhupathi Prabhakara Rao7 minutes ago
    better expressed (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 37,749 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/21/2014 5:53:00 AM)

    Tree bears fruit
    After hard efforts
    It comes in long way
    To enjoy with happiness in any way (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, January 21, 2014

Poem Edited: Tuesday, January 21, 2014


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