Stevie Taite

Rookie - 6 Points (30th January 1973 / Kent, England)

Trespass - Poem by Stevie Taite

Trespass

Each striated fibre screams in tension
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Poet's Notes about The Poem

Just sometimes would like my full quota of massage first! ! !

The pantoum is a form of poetry similar to a villanelle in that there are repeating lines throughout the poem. It is composed of a series of quatrains; the second and fourth lines of each stanza are repeated as the first and third lines of the next. This pattern continues for any number of stanzas, except for the final stanza, which differs in the repeating pattern. The first and third lines of the last stanza are the second and fourth of the penultimate; the first line of the poem is the last line of the final stanza, and the third line of the first stanza is the second of the final. Ideally, the meaning of lines shifts when they are repeated although the words remain exactly the same: this can be done by shifting punctuation, punning, or simply recontextualizing.

A four-stanza pantoum is common, and in the final stanza, you could simply repeat lines one and three from the first stanza, or write new lines. The pantoum 'recipe' is as follows:

Stanza 1 A B C D (or A C B D)

Stanza 2 B E D F (or C E D F)

Stanza 3 E G F H

Stanza 4 G I (or A or C) H J (or A or C) [1]

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Comments about Trespass by Stevie Taite

  • Freshman - 916 Points Chandra Thiagarajan (2/9/2013 9:12:00 AM)

    This form of poetry is surely alluring and thanks for educating! (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 310 Points John Brown (2/4/2013 10:20:00 AM)

    Neat work Stevie. Who's a clever girl then. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,295 Points Tarobinson1103@gmail.com Robinson (2/1/2013 2:51:00 AM)

    Looks like a web well spun
    Not to be a trifle undone
    Will catch a moth or bee the one
    So best beware before brgun (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 146 Points Ruby Honeytip (1/30/2013 11:59:00 PM)

    You are such a clever girl ST. I might have a crack at doing one of these: -) (Report) Reply








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