Triangular Poem by Ananta Madhavan

Triangular

Rating: 4.3


On Sanchi hill a sedentary Buddha
With eyes turned inward, eyes of introspection,
Did not perceive a play of ironies
Enacted on his lap, but I was witness:
There I observed a jaunty tourist couple
Prancing among the uncommenting ruins;
Anon the wench espied the awesome figure,
Lost in a stony trance, so photogenic.
She sate herself with amorous abandon
Upon the lust-less thighs, and nestled closer,
(Her glasses like a pair of death-head sockets) ,
He snapped her thus in that adulterous posture,
Unmindful of the sacrilege, but jealous.

Sunday, April 6, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: traveling
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
1953. I was a young visitor in Sanchi. I disliked camera-eyed tourism.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bharati Nayak 28 August 2016

The behavior of the tourist couple bespeaks their lacks in mannerism, their ignorance and disrespectful attitude towards architecture of historical significance.

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A. Madhavan 28 August 2016

Thank you Poet Bharati. I am grateful for a reader like you who looks up my old offerings of verse and bothers to convey a like-minded reaction. Best wishes. AM

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Joanne Teague 07 April 2014

Nice work here, though slightly disheartening.

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