Diane Hine

Silver Star - 4,107 Points (25 July 1956)

Trio Of Oddments - Poem by Diane Hine

RHYTHM
I saw a line of footprints,
unswerving and forward pointing.
Every third left and right
impression was lightly stressed.
I think the walker was waltzing.

GROOMING
Once, during a tropical sojourn,
I picked lice from a child’s long hair.
Their bodies burst with a gratifying click
between my thumbnail and fingernail.
Chimps eat them but I didn’t.

VISUAL
I guesstimate that
the Milky Way’s dark matter halo,
in which we’re rapt, is equivalent in mass
to several hundred tredecillion
vacuous squid ink squirts.


Poet's Notes about The Poem

- based on an average squid ink squirt of 5 gram? ?
tredecillion = 10^42

Comments about Trio Of Oddments by Diane Hine

  • Gold Star - 27,331 Points Valsa George (10/6/2013 4:51:00 AM)

    This is indeed an odd Trio!
    Rhythm
    I wonder how the man must have walked to leave every third left and right footprint lightly stressed... must be waltzing or a kind of balancing game?
    Grooming
    Slightly nauseating...thugh the click sound is enjoyable!
    Visual
    The dark matter produced by squid ink squirts! Great discovery!
    For picking up such queer topics, you deserve a sure 10 Diana! (Report) Reply

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  • Bronze Star - 2,698 Points Anthony Di''anno (10/6/2013 3:03:00 AM)

    That's enough squid ink to write a life time of poems. I love the machinations of your mind Diane. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 13,537 Points Lyn Paul (9/26/2013 10:47:00 PM)

    Oddments of your imagination Diane, Amazing. You are not a Mad Scientist by any chance? Hope the squid ink is purple for the football this weekend. Thank you (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,284 Points Tarobinson1103@gmail.com Robinson (9/25/2013 1:29:00 PM)

    Strange mishmash collection of condiments. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,738 Points Dinesh Nair (9/25/2013 8:03:00 AM)

    A real trio of oddments with evenness of poetic splendour that runs over each stanza! It is a pace of change for you Diane. Well written! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 432 Points Danny Draper (9/24/2013 6:38:00 AM)

    Is it not a rhythm grooming visual although a half metric tad curt, that initially ignited a Big Bang burst with but wee squid squirts? (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,000 Points Valerie Dohren (9/23/2013 9:14:00 AM)

    What a fertile imagination you have Diane - very odd! ! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, September 23, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, September 24, 2013


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