Diane Hine

Silver Star - 4,112 Points (25 July 1956)

Trio Of Oddments - Poem by Diane Hine

I saw a line of footprints,
unswerving and forward pointing.
Every third left and right
impression was lightly stressed.
I think the walker was waltzing.

Once, during a tropical sojourn,
I picked lice from a child’s long hair.
Their bodies burst with a gratifying click
between my thumbnail and fingernail.
Chimps eat them but I didn’t.

I guesstimate that
the Milky Way’s dark matter halo,
in which we’re rapt, is equivalent in mass
to several hundred tredecillion
vacuous squid ink squirts.

Poet's Notes about The Poem

- based on an average squid ink squirt of 5 gram? ?
tredecillion = 10^42

Comments about Trio Of Oddments by Diane Hine

  • Gold Star - 37,247 Points Valsa George (10/6/2013 4:51:00 AM)

    This is indeed an odd Trio!
    I wonder how the man must have walked to leave every third left and right footprint lightly stressed... must be waltzing or a kind of balancing game?
    Slightly nauseating...thugh the click sound is enjoyable!
    The dark matter produced by squid ink squirts! Great discovery!
    For picking up such queer topics, you deserve a sure 10 Diana! (Report) Reply

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  • Bronze Star - 2,783 Points Anthony Di''anno (10/6/2013 3:03:00 AM)

    That's enough squid ink to write a life time of poems. I love the machinations of your mind Diane. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 17,090 Points Lyn Paul (9/26/2013 10:47:00 PM)

    Oddments of your imagination Diane, Amazing. You are not a Mad Scientist by any chance? Hope the squid ink is purple for the football this weekend. Thank you (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,298 Points Tarobinson1103@gmail.com Robinson (9/25/2013 1:29:00 PM)

    Strange mishmash collection of condiments. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,738 Points Dinesh Nair (9/25/2013 8:03:00 AM)

    A real trio of oddments with evenness of poetic splendour that runs over each stanza! It is a pace of change for you Diane. Well written! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 445 Points Danny Draper (9/24/2013 6:38:00 AM)

    Is it not a rhythm grooming visual although a half metric tad curt, that initially ignited a Big Bang burst with but wee squid squirts? (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,432 Points Valerie Dohren (9/23/2013 9:14:00 AM)

    What a fertile imagination you have Diane - very odd! ! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, September 23, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, September 24, 2013

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