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Troubled Waters

Reflections on
troubled waters
scared me
to death
The dust
the mist
the white lightning
awaken
Misery
travels
Never comes back

Submitted: Friday, May 30, 2008
Edited: Saturday, June 21, 2008


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  • Naidz Ladia (12/15/2008 1:17:00 PM)

    open the gates,
    for heavens above
    death s coming
    no one can stop him.....

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  • Tsira Goge (11/14/2008 10:29:00 AM)

    Sulaiman, Poems causes very strong to sensation... It is good// 10...
    Tsira

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  • ~ Jon London ~ (6/4/2008 9:30:00 PM)

    Crystal bells
    playing
    fragile tones
    compose
    troubles
    into
    bubbles
    that gently
    float
    away

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  • Alice Cuenca (5/30/2008 7:00:00 PM)

    i had this thing with water too...dreams of water...

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