True Feelings Poem by dakota brassfield

True Feelings

Rating: 4.8


We started out good, Just like we should;
We had a good run, But now that its done;
My heart will be with you, Even though im feeling blue;
What would you do, If I said to you;
Let's start all over, But with no other;
If you say no, I have no place to go;
So please say yes, Its just a request;
You mean so much to me, I just wish you would see; There is no other, Except for you my lover.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Devils Favorite Child Blade 14 November 2011

this is amzingly good bro i cant think of any other way to word this better its just that good

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Jt Kaniarz 14 November 2011

dude this is so good congrats

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Galah Denawa 21 November 2011

I think is too flatly for a poem because poem different from the a diary keep on fighting :)

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Jinal Oswal 21 November 2011

Straight from the heart, nice one :)

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Shadow Girl 22 November 2011

heartfelt and sweet, romantic write...sad also...well done..enjoyed -SG x

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I love it very well writen and comes right from the heart i agree with ur cuzin great job Hun! ! ! !

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Jasmine Lynn 06 March 2012

its an amazing poem. like jason said. theres truly no other way to word this. congratz kota.

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this is a really good poem congrats

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Scotty Dogg 28 January 2012

Great poem. tis beautiful! S

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The Devils Girl 22 November 2011

I say 'Yes' lol this is such a beautiful poem. It has just so much feeling in it and I love it so much. It just goes to show that even guys have a soft spot. I love it. <3 Dream

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