True Love Poem by janna pascente
True Love
your love for me is crazy
to bad your so lazy
but i still see ur soul
and its putting me in a bowl
i cant stop thinking about you
its too hard to control
so thank you for loving me
and i will see u when i can
with every step i take
there will be thoughts of you in my head
The words are a little stale babe. Try using more poetic words. Open your soul! Othe rwise very nice piece!
short and sweet......lovely like your name! ! ! Keep writing....
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4/24/2024 10:46:48 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Well, you say you'll see him when you can. Now is that true love or not. I have to wonder. GW62