True Pain Poem by The Poet In Pain

True Pain

Rating: 5.0


My hearts been ripped out
Definitely, without a doubt
My insides have been ripped about

Leaving behind an empty life
Filled with nothing but strife
The pain would end with one cut of the knife

My thoughts are darkened ever more
Without your love, there’s no more
Nothing left to live for

Never will I love again
My heart empty and full of pain
My heart now as cold as the iciest rain

I thought our love was true
The my heart was cut in two
An icy dagger shoving right through

My visions of love dried
My heart denied
My only wish now is to die

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tristan Love-day 07 February 2014

i rlly like the way you wrote this, keep u the gr8 wrk :)

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Brandi Knecht 06 December 2006

love the poem and its gonna get the teacher to give me an a for the day brandi i have also felt that kind of pain

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Janua Catt Alonzo 14 November 2006

a very realistic one, nice piece u got here yan, i love it, , , , Takecare....J.catt

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Onida 07 November 2006

a real way of expressing pain.well done

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