True Submission Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
True Submission
Believe it or not
You are caught
With uncertainty
But life is decided by almighty
Feel sad
And bad too
But never shed tears
Almighty has cheers for you
No one is immortal
Any thing can turn fatal
You are mo more
Very next moment for sure
It is simple logic
It has no basic
It is wish of super power
Accept it as generous offer
Live and spend
Entire time till end
God is with you
And this is very much true
Leave behind all worries
And carry
Your mission
With true submission
It seems to be a true feeling heidi Rehm16 minutes ago It is a witness to how God is Omininent and Awesome. This person is showing how he feels about His higher power. Shows good feeling..
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:) Broken Lullabies?20 minutes ago Inspiration that I needed! Thank you for sharing :) Comment +1
good and Michelle Angel21 minutes ago enjoyable reading that is well wrttten
Typos need correcting. Jan Swan20 minutes ago Flow is inconsistent. Idea is well conveyed. Comment +1
what if Kam Wilkerson12 minutes ago well written poem, but not for everyone to relate. Comment +1
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Believe it or not You are caught