Trust When Intense Poem by Dr subhendu kar

Trust When Intense

Rating: 5.0


As when love eternal as flowing
Dazzles blue by the faith of truth
deeper yet ripples either
And transcended by the bliss
as mystery of love as the myth
When yet reasoned by the rainbow
as revered by the faith of God
All placid into the trust
Seems by the trust intense alone.

the lonely ship when floats in night
in the midst of deep sea in its direction
taking all its fathom by the depth
reeling by the waves in its room
as it happen when does as intoned
fizzles by the fear when fledged
in the mute corridors of silence
as the eternal swing as in spring

neither from impulsion it smacks
nor by the compulsion it glues
but by the inner whispers it blooms
as latching on to the one another
yet unknown to the mortal glance
as reviewed from beyond and beneath
As the clouds come raining the grins
over the greens slushig the sorrow

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tsira Goge 11 March 2008

'the lonely ship when floats in night in the midst of deep sea in its direction...' It is Abnormally lovely poems, subhendu... Tsira

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CU2urDream Lost 27 November 2007

what shall i say more than that! great job....

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Ewigi Liebe 20 November 2007

When yet reasoned by the rainbow as revered by the faith of God All placid into the trust Seems by the trust intense alone. Wake every morning with the awe of just being alive. Discover each day the magnificent, awesome beauty in the world. Explore and embrace life in yourself and in everyone you see each day. Reach within to find your own specialness. Amaze yourself and rouse those around you to the potential of each new day. well done Dr. kar, love is full of mystery that no one could explain...top mark. Mary :)

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Thad Wilk 14 November 2007

Very eloquent write Dr Car! The mystery 's of love an intense trust not easily understood, and harder to explain. A *10 *! ! ! ! ! Thad

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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