Mckenzi Lew

Rookie (11.4.93 / i wanna be in the bahamas)

Trying To Forget - Poem by Mckenzi Lew

at one time you said you loved me, but it was just a lie
are you just gonna forget me? forever say goodbye?
i say it doesn't matter, that it doesn't bother me at all
but really its kills me when you never call
i gave you my trust, my heart and my soul
but since you went and did this i think you should know
i take it all back, i'll tell them you didnt mean a thing
so maybe i can forget, forget about the pain.


Comments about Trying To Forget by Mckenzi Lew

  • Bronze Star - 2,367 Points john tiong chunghoo (3/30/2008 2:02:00 AM)

    so many snapses of love in this site. l love them. good one mckenzi. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Emancipation Planz (2/27/2008 2:50:00 PM)

    you try to forget and make me remember.. You took me right back to my first lost love and you have expressed the experience perfectly... another 10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tracker Ogryphon (2/23/2008 1:06:00 PM)

    Kenzi, This is the poemI previously voted as a (10) , It says so much in just a few words. I have re-voted it a 10.

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  • Rookie Who Iam (2/20/2008 10:22:00 PM)

    Ms Lew,

    Your style is uniquely your own, one better than the other, sensitivity and pain; both part of life.Each one a good write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie I LOVE MY S.O.S! ! ! ALWAYS & 4 EVER..! ! .. (2/12/2008 8:57:00 AM)

    wow that is good. you write good poems. :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Erin Duphily (2/9/2008 7:50:00 PM)

    Thank you! !
    Thank you very much! ! ! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, February 9, 2008



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