Tsunamis Far Beyond...! Poem by saadat tahir

felt as if i was reading Kahlil Gibran....i the forerunner, and u the shadow gathered at my feet....the gatherer n the gathered! your words have a lingering effect, long after they are read and reminisced! Peace out!

true..the calm pond seems lifeless...yet with lot of life

beauty of a pond or lake is quite different from others.. so calm n quiet... disasters r far away 4m dem.. true write... lovely..

profound composition...ah! what a life these are our strife tsunamis far beyond which stays in the pond...10+++

There are certainly some undercurrents in this poem Saadat. It is deep and meaningful and well crafted. 10 Karin Anderson

I love the simplicity of your words here. Good one Sat. Shirl :))

A truly profound write Saadat, ripples here could be tsunamis elsewhere..10++

Like a trickle can create a tsunami so can a handful of words create a beautiful poem.. Thank you for sharing :)

yes, the small ripples could be tsunamis for others far of.i liked it...

Ahhh....I liked that....It's wonderful to express so thoughtfully thru a handful of words...Brishti.....10++