saadat tahir

(21011965 / Islamabad-Pakistan)

Tsunamis Far Beyond...!

Paired delectable lilies,
bob on a placid pond.
Spawning ripples and
tsunamis far beyond...!


Submitted: Monday, June 15, 2009
Edited: Wednesday, June 29, 2011

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Duh Huh (7/10/2009 12:49:00 PM)

    Like a trickle can create a tsunami so can a handful of words create a beautiful poem.. Thank you for sharing :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Brishti Mazumdar (6/25/2009 10:03:00 AM)

    Ahhh....I liked that....It's wonderful to express so thoughtfully thru a handful of words...Brishti.....10++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Catrina Heart (6/19/2009 11:29:00 PM)

    profound composition...ah! what a life these are our strife tsunamis far beyond which stays in the pond...10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Priyanka Bhowmick (6/18/2009 8:25:00 AM)

    beauty of a pond or lake is quite different from others..
    so calm n quiet... disasters r far away 4m dem..
    true write... lovely.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Ritty Patnaik (6/16/2009 1:35:00 AM)

    sadat, this poems surpasses all, in its meaning, few lines, and the tsunami it has created in my mind.will read it over....and best wishes! .....ritty (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Aamnah Akhtar (6/15/2009 11:08:00 AM)

    felt as if i was reading Kahlil Gibran....i the forerunner, and u the shadow gathered at my feet....the gatherer n the gathered!

    your words have a lingering effect, long after they are read and reminisced!

    Peace out! (Report) Reply

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