Tumbling World Restored Poem by Smiling Inside

Tumbling World Restored



A smile,
Which covered my fear,
To let go a tear,
Into my broken world,

A tear,
Which showed emotions,
Mixed with my colored motions,
Into my broken world,

A broken world,
Which made me tumble down,
Until I hit the ground,
Will be restored again

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cain XXX 18 June 2010

nicely written. :) . the positioning of the words was impactful.

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Joseph Poewhit 14 June 2010

Much thought behind a few words - KEEP TRUCKIN

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Adeline Foster 11 June 2010

Keep writing, you'll get the hang of it. But remember, a poem should never be forced on rhyme. You're off to a good start. Adeline

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Andrew Bellon 11 June 2010

clear, direct transmission of your thoughts, not yet clairvoyant but getting there, lol.

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