Twilight Poem by The Light and the darkness

Twilight

Rating: 5.0


Realm of thought
Shaken to distraught.
Revelation newly caught
Dawning now a twilight on my thought.

Devious circles twining tongues.
Smashing again and again against
A wall that forths no gain.

Efforts fall helplessly
One by one
Each and every one
Into a never-ending path
That lead to no good seed.

Action, reaction then miscontraction
Pile the future up, towering
A Babylon of merciless dissatisfaction.

Phrases recaught which previously fought.
Fights previously thought
Now presently brought.

Will in my chest this torture ever cease?
Or torch away my breath my heart
Will be us
Or yet
A wall
Fall apart?
A nightfall or dawn, make this twilight depart.

2000-08-10

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Barbara Terry 08 July 2009

The twilight of love can be a good thing or it can be a bad thing. In this piece the narrator is questioning if the relationship will continue. Just because the twilight is in the heart, and the heart fears rejection, doesn't mean the relationship is over or is going to be over. All it means is as we get older we start to question ourselves. This is a very emotional write with a moral and a message. A 10+++++ and thank you for sharing. Love & hugs, Barbara

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