Twin Triplets (No.3) Thoughts, Heightened Perception Poem by Valsa George

Twin Triplets (No.3) Thoughts, Heightened Perception

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THOUGHTS

Winged messengers of the brain
Ever in motion, never at rest
The sneaking invaders of the quiet

HEIGHTENED PERCEPTION

An ocean in a drop of water
The Cosmos in a speck of dust
A divine spark in every being

Sunday, January 27, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: thoughts
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jahan Zeb 27 January 2013

A divine spark in every being Very thoughtful. I love the ideas you present in your poems.

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Chandra Thiagarajan 27 January 2013

Your THOUGHTS and your HEIGHTENED PERCEPTION are really awesome! Awaiting more of TWIN TRIPLETS

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Kavya . 29 January 2013

ur poem made the winged messengers of my brain move doubly.. thx for sharing.

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Triplets for a couple of thoughts blowing like a breeze...

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Valerie Dohren 31 January 2013

Very innovative presentation Valsa - love the concept and the depth of thought you express.

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Savita Tyagi 27 February 2020

Simply loving these triplets. I am glad to have gone to your poems and find these wonderful reflective poems. Thank you Valsa for these gems of poetry.

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Mahtab Bangalee 27 November 2019

depth writings /// thoughts and highest perception motherly womb of expression of human existence///

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Akhtar Jawad 29 August 2018

Both the triplets are thoughtful and philosophic, but THOUGHTS has more poetic beauty.

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Richard Wlodarski 25 February 2018

Wow! This is the 1st in the series that I've read and I'm in total awe! Valsa, I love all of your poetry. And now, you've taken it to an even higher level. Can't wait to read the rest in the series! Bravo! ! !

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 October 2017

Wonderfully crafted on thought and perception. Cute imaginary. Perception is an ocean in a drop of water whereas thought is winged messenger of the brain. Nice presentation.

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