Twin Triplets. No.6. Cliche Poem by Valsa George

beautiful :) simply beautiful...

The statement and the experience still go parallel ever. Under living of the experience is the result of lengthened phases of life perhaps... everything extended has an inherent touch of inevitable debacle. Hope your 'littleness' will not make the creator feel still 'larger'...

I observe Your Humility in both the Twin Triplets, and am amazed in the way you present them one after another.! Waiting for more Twin Triplets from your pen.! !

Wow so beautiful twin triplets. Loved reading it. Yes, I am too waiting for more Twin Triplets. Really beautiful presentation.

Yes a map of universe shows an arrow stating our solar system is somewhere here!

Very profound, Valsa. " An over stated expression...." Is it cliche merely because it is a constantly demanded, yet unrequited need? Does that explain cliches, and why they may be more profound than we suspect? These twins go to myfavourites.

Expression of love for God is greatly expressed in this tenderly flown poem. Every word touches heart with Divine beauty. Re-visiting this poem I feel glad. Thank you very much for sharing this poem Madam Legend Star Valsa George.

Creator of the universe Lord of infinity How little I am before you! ... great theme. In God's creation we are too little to than huge things. Beautifully captured.

'I LOVE YOU' An over stated expression But an under lived experience! Such an immediate impact these words give. Love is an under lived experience for many. In this world many pay lip service to love. They verbalize these words yet never experience or try to create love in their lives.10

Oh! Double the pleasure, double the fun.! I like this opportunity! You are, sadly, correct in your view of those too-often used words- I love you. It is, as you say, an under-lived experience. And perhaps that's the key to the state of mankind world-wide. And the second poem? Excellent. We need to remember how small we are when we think of the Creator who made all things microscopic and huge and inter-related. Thank you for the pleasure of reading your poems and sharing your thoughts. 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++