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Twin Triplets. No.6

Said, Never Lived!


"I LOVE YOU"
An over stated expression
But an under lived experience!


My Littleness

Creator of the universe
Lord of infinity
How little I am before you!

Submitted: Tuesday, February 19, 2013


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  • Chandra Thiagarajan (2/22/2013 11:38:00 AM)

    I observe Your Humility in both the Twin Triplets, and am amazed in the way you present them one after another.!
    Waiting for more Twin Triplets from your pen.! !

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  • Dinesh Nair ( I Will Be Back Later!) (2/20/2013 3:17:00 AM)

    The statement and the experience still go parallel ever. Under living of the experience is the result of lengthened phases of life perhaps... everything extended has an inherent touch of inevitable debacle.
    Hope your 'littleness' will not make the creator feel still 'larger'...

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  • Thomas A Robinson (2/19/2013 5:56:00 PM)

    The smallest things contain the greatest treasures
    The spark of life
    A twinkle in the eye
    the sadness of goodbye
    Concern in the question why
    The baby's soft sigh

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  • Arkay Dass (2/19/2013 5:37:00 AM)

    beautiful :) simply beautiful...

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