Fay Slimm

Rookie - 12 Points (Ageless. / in Cornwall U.K.)

Two Different Lives? - Poem by Fay Slimm

Had she misunderstood those warm invites
To travel and taste a different world?
Her sheltered close life denied her. She might
'Tho allow fancy to fly. Control learned,
She could only re-read the lovely lines
Of tenderest words, and bury them deep
In her innermost soul. Unbidden, her mind
Now uncovers new dreams, secrets she'll keep.
In different places within her warmed heart.
Knowing, once found, soul-mates are never apart.


Comments about Two Different Lives? by Fay Slimm

  • Rookie - 0 Points Tom Balch (12/15/2008 10:55:00 AM)

    Lovely Fay, really nice piece, regards Tom 10/10 (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Kris Smith (12/12/2008 7:50:00 AM)

    Truely warm soft write, hope your travels come alive 10 ++++ Chris (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kevin Eaglesfield (12/12/2008 4:15:00 AM)

    I really like this, Fay.How many people have something like this in their lives? Makes you think.Warm regards for a warm and tender poem.Going in me faves.Kev x (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, December 12, 2008



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