Two Flowers And The Bird Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Two Flowers And The Bird

Rating: 5.0


Alas! it's me who fell down in love!
But one who got a crown in love,
Almost alike both are pretty flowers,
Smiled, Oh Bird! In your handsome bowers,
I was shy I could not sing in love,
And you wanted a sting in love!
Pleasure of stings that doesn't sustain,
When stings are over it turns in pain,
How could I give a sting to you!
I could only give a spring to you,
She in the bouquet and I am down,
Could you see me in a jet white gown!
Lying on the bed and before I depart,
Take back the spring of my broken heart!

Two Flowers And The Bird
Sunday, January 18, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love and pain
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 20 January 2015

A lovely poem accompanied by a lovely picture of a bird and two flowers! Enjoyed!

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Geetha Jayakumar 23 January 2015

A Beautiful poem with lovely picture of bird and two flowers. Beautiful flow of words. Loved reading it.

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Khalid Saifullah 01 September 2016

What a lovely and sweet sad song.....................................

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Bisma Mirza 20 January 2015

I am loving this poem..... [3 amazing one........

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Khalida Bano Ali 18 January 2015

An amazing beauty, a sad but sweet and heart touching poem......................10

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 14 August 2020

Revisiting this lovely poem. Beautiful imagery and great rhyme So mellifluous when read.

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Sankhajit Bhattacharjee 14 September 2019

Love and pain remain side by side.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 14 September 2019

A lovely poem sir..... scintillating poetic expression with engaging fragrance....10

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Nadia Umber Lodhi 27 October 2018

Nice and bea poem as usual by javed sb

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Khalid Saifullah 30 March 2018

Beautiful, sad and touching, a great poem.

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