Two Flowers From The Same Garden Poem by Charlie Galan

Two Flowers From The Same Garden

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We shared the same garden,
Before the fall of Angels
And the end of Eden.

From us came sacred flowers,
With precious petals that crumbled when held,
Blooms that might have flourished
If they'ed been left 'unattended' by others..

We were two flowers from the same garden,
Who by our nature disintegrate on touch,
But need to be touched
And touched
And turned into the finest most beautiful dust.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mary Gordley 24 January 2008

So very much of a relationship relayed in so very few lines. Your poem is deeply moving with the last stanza truly memorable. Thanks.

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Subbaraman N V 23 January 2008

A very nice write with a great truth behind!

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