Two Hearts Poem by Daniel Brick

Two Hearts

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The physical heart is everybody's
guess and no one is wrong. But
that other heart, the one we know
only through rumors carried by
urgent winds or messages coded
in birdsong or by the report of angels.

So ancient is that other heart, we can
only know it by indirection. Its deep
mystery can only be grasped by those
penetrated by love. It is a story
whose ending is rewritten by such lovers.
It is spirit-stuff and vanishes when it is

situated among human beings whose confused
responses justify the hidden place to which
the physical heart tries to confine it.
This is our second heart which understands
every language on earth but chooses to only
speak through feelings. Oh, you lovers,

don't you sense only one heart beating
in double time, blending the material and
the spiritual in a union so perfect,
so transparent we can hardly see it
in the glare of ordinary light. Say then,
there is one heart whose two halves long

to be whole. Of the spiritual half, you lovers
can give us further knowledge of its practice.
We hunger for this knowledge: it is the truth
of our being, the source of our goodness, what
makes us beautiful. We agree to be faithful
to its austere discipline. We bow before its glory!

Whatever you have learned from your immersion
in the forms of love, spill it, scatter it
in our midst, let it become a flood that carries
us to a higher plateau or being or drowns us
in this muddy lowland. We must grasp the truth
you lovers know, the truth by which we live or die:

Only those who love unconditionally, only those
who know the true path is illuminated by love,
only those who have sworn to live every moment
in love given and love received, only those
will be redeemed. Look backward to the beginning
of humanity, look forward to its end, witness its fused heart.

Thursday, September 29, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: religious,vision
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nosheen Irfan 03 October 2016

A piece of great depth n insight. Philosophical, spiritual n mystical. How you have explored the mystery of heart, its physical n spiritual sides, it leaves the reader awestruck. Only those who love unconditionally...will be redeemed, that's a great mystic concept. Your poem speaks to the reader on many levels. And every reading enlightens the reader more. Peace can only be achieved by a perfect fusion of the material n spiritual. The poem takes us beyond the ordinary n we experience a higher level of consciousness. A big 10

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Daniel Brick 04 October 2016

It's wonderful my poem resonates so deeply with you. Your comments reflect the self-talk going on in my head as I wrote it but expressed in clear, emphatic prose which has a poetic element in it. How could it be otherwise? !

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M Asim Nehal 29 September 2016

The love you talked about is the love for humanity, love beyond the physical beauty, natural beauty and beauty we can see, touch, hear, smell but the real Love is the one we can feel and realize and live and even die for it. We all have the love spring hidden inside our heart, very seldom we unleash it and allow it to flow free, the boundaries, limits, demarcations and the lines put total restriction on its freedom....A thought provoking poem...LOVED IT, Mr. Daniel,100+++++

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Daniel Brick 04 October 2016

Mohammed your prose comment captures all of the key parts of my poem expressed in enthusiastic word poem refers not to the format but the vision the words convey. IPoem + Comment = a meeting of minds - yours and mine.

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