Two Kites Poem by Rini Shibu

Two Kites

Rating: 4.3


Sunny day in the open meadows
So fun when the kites flew
Soar off the ground like rainbows
Two kites flew, the wind blew

Gust of wind took them higher
Trees swayed and leaves danced
Pulled the strings all the fliers
Ran behind as the kite advanced.

Sudden turbulence hit the kite
Kites swinged high up in the sky
Strings tangled and knotted the kites
Along the  hills kites flyby.

Two Kites
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Strings tangled and knotted the kites Along the hills kites flyby.... the journey of the kite never ends like us...... wonderful poem best wishes rini shibu.... you are a nature lover and nature poet American poet told that nature and his soul are two mothers for him you also blessed by those two mothers.....

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Rini Shibu 22 May 2017

Thanks a lot sarav....

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Unknown?? 03 December 2020

Wowwwwwwwww😍😍😍😍😍😍😍i am in love 💘

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Robert Murray Smith 23 June 2018

A wonderfully uplifting poem.++10

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Ashika Murali Acharya 20 February 2018

I like the simplicity of subject that you choose to write. Nice write.

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Rini Shibu 21 February 2018

Thanks Akshita.. Rini***

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 September 2017

To flying kites is interesting. Life is like kite. It has to face many obatacles as kite faces. It is a best philosophical poem shared. Thanks.

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Rini Shibu 05 September 2017

Thank you so much Kumar.. Rini

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Bill Cantrell 07 August 2017

Oh how nice! Kites are full of wonder, I'm glad I happened upon your poetry, if you wish, read a poem I write regarding kites called mashal

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Rini Shibu 07 August 2017

Thanks for inviting me to read your poem Mashal..

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