Sunny day in the open meadows
So fun when the kites flew
Soar off the ground like rainbows
Two kites flew, the wind blew
Gust of wind took them higher
Trees swayed and leaves danced
Pulled the strings all the fliers
Ran behind as the kite advanced.
Sudden turbulence hit the kite
Kites swinged high up in the sky
Strings tangled and knotted the kites
Along the hills kites flyby.
I like the simplicity of subject that you choose to write. Nice write.
To flying kites is interesting. Life is like kite. It has to face many obatacles as kite faces. It is a best philosophical poem shared. Thanks.
Oh how nice! Kites are full of wonder, I'm glad I happened upon your poetry, if you wish, read a poem I write regarding kites called mashal
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Strings tangled and knotted the kites Along the hills kites flyby.... the journey of the kite never ends like us...... wonderful poem best wishes rini shibu.... you are a nature lover and nature poet American poet told that nature and his soul are two mothers for him you also blessed by those two mothers.....
Thanks a lot sarav....