Two Moods -1 Poem by Ratnakar Mandlik

Two Moods -1

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Fightinh against the onslaught of the roaring tides
In chest deep water struggling for balance,
Throws in sea water a fisherman his net
In hide tide to earn livelihood in twilight.

Oblivious of every thing in the dim light
A couple on the beach enjoyed the moment.
Entwined they were though not physically
Through eyes they enjoyed the mirth of unity.

Poet: Ratnakar D Mandlik

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aniruddha Pathak 02 August 2019

Creates a beautiful word picture, lovely.

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Dr Antony Theodore 07 December 2018

Oblivious of every thing in the dim light A couple on the beach enjoyed the moment. enjoying the mirth of unity.... your powerful use of words and expressions reveal that you have studied Eng. Lit.. thank u dear poet. tony

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Valsa George 23 July 2016

I visualize the two scenes... a fisherman casting net and a couple enjoying their mutual presence...... both scenes coupled in this poem!

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Edward Kofi Louis 22 March 2016

In the dim light. Nice work.

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Ratnakar Mandlik

Ratnakar Mandlik

Hyderabad(A.P.) , India
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