Two Moods -2 Poem by Ratnakar Mandlik

Two Moods -2

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Blowing hot air on scorching summer noon,
Humid atmosphere soaking in perspiration
Compel even the birds to find their shelter
Leaving solitary ocean with his tides to roar.

Solace could be found from sip through straw,
When ambrosia from a raw coconut you draw.
That can make you in scorching summer calm,
Standing beneath meager shadow of a palm.

Poet; Ratnakar D Mandlik

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aniruddha Pathak 02 August 2019

Another lovely word picture, dear poet

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Mahtab Bangalee 10 February 2019

so sweetly written- Solace could be found from sip through straw, When ambrosia from a raw coconut you draw//

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Valsa George 11 August 2016

The shade of a tree and a cool drink can ease the heat of the summer days.... Nature itself provides remedies to come out of the scourges that she sets for man.....! Thus the problem and its remedy are before us...! We should have the intelligence to use them and believe that no problem is without a solution! ! Great write!

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Edward Kofi Louis 22 March 2016

Blowing hot air! ! ! With the muse of nature. Thanks for sharing.

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Ratnakar Mandlik

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Hyderabad(A.P.) , India
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