Two Nobel Prizes For Ahmed Khaled Poem by ahmed khaled

Two Nobel Prizes For Ahmed Khaled



in the day..
he went out
finding no sky
in one minute
he threw his ink
to give the world meaning
and a new sky
in the night..
he was awakened
finding no stars
in other minute
he threw his pen
to give the world light
and new stars
for those two minutes
he received..
two nobel prizes.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Josephine Collett 26 January 2012

original idea beautifully written ahmed.

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Rajendran Muthiah 08 January 2012

He threw his ink two times to receive two nobel prizes because he gav e meaning to the world in the first minute and to give light and new stars to the world in the second minute. Two noble deeds brought him two nobels. A magnificent poem sir!

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Allemagne Roßmann 29 September 2011

very well said and well written..i appreciate..

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Vipins Puthooran 29 September 2011

Nice poem..some conctricted feelings sometimes suffocating us to show the right things...

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Unwritten Soul 25 September 2011

Hahaahh..this mean he writing about the things he doesnt know/have? ? ? Hmm...I guess he knows, when he writes he use words and words he used to describe and the description is a picture, to give a best picture must be a big idea and it all comes from words, and the words who helps him translate all thought he had, he never writes unless he thinks about it...Maybe if he writes quite blur but, trying to clarify something is a noble thing... it passing over creatives boundaries! remember all scientists come with a theory...and theory not a fact, not the final but it still be used until there's another proves show the theory is wrong...but not easy for theory fall down, because it constructed by the mind of strong... So if Ahmed works something for etraordinary for himself, he should receive award, if not two nobel prizes, he still get my honors..maybe two soul awards hahahahaha joking...be positive! _Unwritten Soul

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