Treasure Island

Monk E. Biz

(Timeless / Right Now, Right Here)

Two Opinions, but Only ONE Prevails!

When there are two opinions
and one prevails,
the other one dies,
in a dark sea it sails

When one stands tall and in the sun
the other goes away...
and has no fun

There is always a loser when there is a winner
always one is right-eous and the other a sinner

Submitted: Wednesday, July 02, 2014
Edited: Monday, July 14, 2014

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  • Sandra Feldman (7/13/2014 8:37:00 PM)

    Philosophically right,
    Poetically Perfect! (Report) Reply

    Mazhari David (7/14/2014 7:01:00 AM)

    Philosophically right? ? ? I doubt about that... like it is right that there is a winner and a loser? A sinner and a saint? Charming philosophy... not mine* *

  • Ed Nigma (7/4/2014 12:43:00 AM)

    There is no loss without a win. Without your opinion my thought fails to exist. I really like this one much said in few words. I like the line... in a dark sea it sails, cause the first thing I grab unto is it's an opinion disappearing into a subconscious thought tucked away from conscious thought always in existence out of time. Allan Gerard~ (Report) Reply

  • Sandra Feldman (7/2/2014 3:34:00 PM)

    It seems that in this country now, anyone that thinks is a sinner. Will opinions still count?
    It's good you reduced the amount.
    Good work! (Report) Reply

  • Lorraine Colon (7/2/2014 2:53:00 PM)

    Great poem, but of course, this is just your opinion. Let me tell you what I think..... oh, never mind, ha! (Report) Reply

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