Udunome Poem by chip reed

Udunome

Rating: 5.0


you have judged and labeled me so dramatcally
taking me to a new level of substantiallity
i cant stand or sit or function properly
all because your judgemental opinion of me
and that i've had it so ruff attitude
aww life is too tuff dude
she says
im wasting my time talking to you
where through
go ahead make your comments
go ahead and leave for months
i havent seen you since
it doesnt make any sense
im spent
on this hypocriticness
and please god bless
the next word out my mouth
is i guess
and then i pause so stricken and broken
by the words we've spoken
and the dispute that keeps goin
and the happiness
that exists between the lines
in the pages of our arguments
i shift
off all of my whos had it ruffer comments
and just take a deep breath
and look at her
and im gone

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chip reed

chip reed

jacksonvill florida
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