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You are still,
loved, and in my dreams,
susceptible to haze of dusts and smokes,
Converged to black holes,
Like a stray astroid,
blown to sparks,
my trembling hands,
are frail to touch you,
before my offsprings,
I can make you anoyed,
with revengeful words,
but i am like a disabled ambitions,
Unable to forget you,
Unable to get you.
Sahar Sahar
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Saturday, November 28, 2009 |
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Wednesday, May 26, 2010 |
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Comments about this poem (Unable to forget
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Sahar Sahar
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Afzal Shauq (8/15/2010 7:59:00 AM)
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but i am like a disabled ambitions,
Unable to forget you,
Unable to get you.
wow what a romantic philosophy here..your position in between gain and loss is really a question mark.. and you know a good question is always better the perfect answer..like your philosophical way of expression here in this poem..loved it..yeah quite impressive too
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Ejaz Khan (12/9/2009 4:00:00 AM)
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A good poem here, Sahar, it got a great flow, keep it up!
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Dr.subhendu Kar (12/7/2009 8:18:00 AM)
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susceptible to haze of dusts and smokes,
Converged to black holes,
Like a stray astroid,
blown to sparks, .......................most passionate write, love seems to jingle by nature, yet ingeniously curved on te rune of dreams,10++++, thanks for sharing
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Mehta hasmukh amathalal (12/6/2009 10:35:00 PM)
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can make you anoyed,
with revengeful words,
but i am like a disabled ambitions,
Unable to forget you,
Unable to get you.... I am love birdand long for your each kind gesure... iam unableto forget and thiswhere the poetess has made good difference... lovlyhpoem for allthe time i feelthatway....10
read mine not easy.... i miss
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Afzal Shauq (12/1/2009 3:20:00 AM)
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but i am like a disabled ambitions,
Unable to forget you,
Unable to get you
wow what a sweet poem and the idea you expressed here is couragious and inspiring alot. its really a prpfessionally written poem with impressive touches.. romantic abd very much poetic one..well done 10/10
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