Unaccepted Poem by Rodney Quills

Unaccepted

Rating: 5.0


She sobs uncontrollably
Tears streaming down her face
The razor blade in her hand
She couldn't find her place

Unaccepted by people
She hated her life
She's gonna end it tonight

Sitting at home alone
Wishing for a friend
That was all she wanted
But now it's gonna end

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Michele Weston 19 April 2007

Wow, very moving, you painted the picture in my head as if I was sitting right next to her, very fine piece

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Tayla Conde 04 December 2006

aaww that sounds just like me man...i sometimes feel like i dont belong and that i am unwanted, but anywho. : ]

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