Samanyan Lakshminarayanan


# #unbelievable [ 3 Liner] - Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

a butterfly had
got stuck high up in the moon
lost all its color


Comments about # #unbelievable [ 3 Liner] by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

  • Rookie - 80 Points Kesav Easwaran (11/4/2009 10:57:00 AM)

    a good fantasy there...i like the imagery it provides...10 (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Sandhya S N (10/29/2009 3:55:00 AM)

    yes as your heading...it is unbeleivable
    but interesting
    regards
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  • Rookie Salu Salu (10/26/2009 1:46:00 AM)

    wow! ! ! well weird thought...super insight..nice image.
    rgrds/salu (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 72 Points Akram Saqib (10/25/2009 12:15:00 PM)

    fantastic idea but moon gives the sweetness (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 23 Points Rajaram Ramachandran (10/23/2009 7:41:00 PM)

    How can a butterfly go to the moon? How can it lose its color? It is really unbelievable. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Carol Gall (10/23/2009 12:22:00 PM)

    nice 3 liner.................... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, October 23, 2009

Poem Edited: Friday, October 30, 2009


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