# #unbelievable [ 3 Liner] Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

# #unbelievable [ 3 Liner]

Rating: 3.0


a butterfly had
got stuck high up in the moon
lost all its color

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Carol Gall 23 October 2009

nice 3 liner....................

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Kesav Easwaran 04 November 2009

a good fantasy there...i like the imagery it provides...10

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Sandhya S N 29 October 2009

yes as your heading...it is unbeleivable but interesting regards sandhya

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Salu Salu 26 October 2009

wow! ! ! well weird thought...super insight..nice image. rgrds/salu

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Akram Saqib 25 October 2009

fantastic idea but moon gives the sweetness

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Rajaram Ramachandran 23 October 2009

How can a butterfly go to the moon? How can it lose its color? It is really unbelievable.

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