Unbound Poem by guillermo veloso

Unbound

Rating: 5.0


The slavery of emotion
The illusion of desire
The lie of life
The deception in her eyes
The façade of this house of cards
The dream dreamt

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Ramesh Rai 01 February 2012

he slavery of emotion The illusion of desire The lie of life The deception in her eyes i also do not like.but i like your short and sweet poem with a good flow

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Dave Walker 30 January 2012

Really like it. Short and sweet with a great flow. A great poem. May i invite you to read my new poem called, Evil Rising.

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