Unbreakable Box Poem by Theorem The Truth Serum

Unbreakable Box

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I still long for you
though you are out of bounds
A ball struck too hard
because fate brought you to me
in a clear unbreakable box
I can see through the plexi glass
and I can hear your voice
sweet voice as well
This is all I can enjoy
I'm afraid
Unless fate brings me a tool to break open this box

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Matthew Pearson 27 August 2005

A jump from a struck ball to a box. Work on this one a little, and I think the extra work will reward you. It has potential.

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