Treasure Island

Theorem The Truth Serum

(1979-present / San Leandro)

Unbreakable Box


I still long for you
though you are out of bounds
A ball struck too hard
because fate brought you to me
in a clear unbreakable box
I can see through the plexi glass
and I can hear your voice
sweet voice as well
This is all I can enjoy
I'm afraid
Unless fate brings me a tool to break open this box

Submitted: Saturday, August 27, 2005
Edited: Sunday, March 02, 2008

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  • Matthew Pearson (8/27/2005 2:10:00 PM)

    A jump from a struck ball to a box. Work on this one a little, and I think the extra work will reward you. It has potential. (Report) Reply

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