Uncertain Poem by Richa Dhodi

Uncertain

Rating: 5.0


I weave his talks,
And store as thoughts…
To twinkle his charm …
Till his next meet…
Sometimes he disheartens with his long wait..
And cause an uncertainty to shake…

Right now the state is uncertain…
And my charming thoughts are stale
His knock is required
But he utters no speech
This silence phase kills me
Kills me to a deep din…

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sarvesh Kulkarni 29 October 2008

This was a passionate and sincere poem. Loved reading it. Thank you.

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Dr Kamran Haider 07 October 2008

Uncertainty and ambivalence are indeed deadly … Flawless piece adorned with true pain of wait and when prayers remain unanswered and when love becomes a canker…

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Tom Balch 05 October 2008

I like this piece a lot, the opening two line are really great 10/10 Tom

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Kelly Allen Vinal 29 September 2008

Wow - what an interesting and well-done piece!

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