Tara Acharya

Rookie - 25 Points (June 30,1981 / India)

UNCONDITIONAL LOVE


When I am lonely he is there
We fight, we care
We love, we share
We are not foes and not just friends
Never soul-mates, nor are lovers

Life is a joy when he is near
Incomplete are we without each other
My soul gets brighten with his smile
He showed me dreams all this while.

He is the sky, I the earth
He is the sun and me the star
Tell me, if they can ever meet?
Without each other are they complete?

The sky keeps showering love on earth
What can the poor thing give in return?
All she wants is to be close to him
Keeps on waiting for the dropp of stream

This love so pure, so unconditional
Makes me complete, makes me real
We can’t touch and feel each other
Can’t hold hands and walk together

I just wonder why he came
To make me happy and awesome
I just want to live this moment
Without any fear, just in present

Why do you ask me what’s our relation?
Even I don’t know this emotion.
This love so pure, so unconditional
Makes me complete, makes me real.

Submitted: Thursday, December 28, 2006
Edited: Friday, December 17, 2010

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  • Rookie Vinod Kumar (1/15/2009 9:36:00 AM)

    Made for each other, a dedicated poem to the unconditional pure love, very emotional art work, thank you author for shring,10++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jibin Joseph (12/29/2006 2:09:00 AM)

    i can see from this poem............you have a great heart...........a heart which share and cares.........the emotions so pure and true.............so innocent..............a touchy poem.....truly unconditional love

    keep writing
    love kuttus (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Raghavan Warrier (12/28/2006 2:42:00 PM)

    Hey Tara, knowingly or unknowingly you touched on the imagery from Ramayana; Ram the king from Suryavamsi and Sita the daughter of earth.
    'I just wonder why he came
    To make me happy and awesome
    I just want to live this moment
    Without any fear, just in present'
    This is an observation which attracted me very much. Very true. Love's most beautiful experience is that you forget the past and you don't care for the future. It enables you to enjoy the present; which otherwise you enjoy only in the deepest stages of meditation.
    Excellent poem (Report) Reply

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