kanav justa

Veteran Poet - 1,478 Points (Shimla)

Uncontainable Nature - Poem by kanav justa

leaves when touched by autumn
fades to color grey
none can stop them falling
no prayer would make them stay

you cannot seize the night dark
nor can conquer the glittering day
a skylark when forced to sing
goes swiftly away

Comments about Uncontainable Nature by kanav justa

  • Yash Shinde (4/1/2014 11:29:00 PM)

    ......we humans are so powerful, yet some things exist beyond our control, a beautifully crafted piece Kanav, helds such a great message in few lines! ` (Report) Reply

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  • (3/23/2014 11:24:00 AM)

    We are little against Nature's rhythm. So much we can not change yet we may enjoy while it lasts. Lovely poem to enjoy. Also glad that you enjoyed one of my poem. Thank you so much. (Report) Reply

  • Anthony Burkett (2/8/2014 11:05:00 AM)

    A wonderful segue from nature's indomitable power to the human condition... well penned. (Report) Reply

  • Valerie Dohren (2/4/2014 4:51:00 PM)

    Much beauty in a few lines - well done Kanav. (Report) Reply

  • (2/4/2014 1:18:00 AM)

    Rightly said......Kanav..........Uncontainable Nature beyond our comprehension....well crafted (Report) Reply

  • Geetha Jayakumar (2/3/2014 10:00:00 AM)

    A wonderful poem. Beautiful flow of words, with matching rhythm. Great message it carries, many things are beyond our control, in fact nothing is in our control. Loved it. (Report) Reply

  • Kavya . (2/3/2014 4:09:00 AM)

    a very nice rhyming poem..enjoyed every line.......... (Report) Reply

  • Ruby Mostazir (2/3/2014 2:41:00 AM)

    No words to say...it just touch my heart! 100 & 10 for it :) (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (2/3/2014 2:04:00 AM)

    We cannot reverse the natural rhythm of life! Though somethings are within man's control, many a happening lies outside his grasp and command! A philosophical write, Kanav! ! (Report) Reply

  • (2/3/2014 12:51:00 AM)

    a lovely poem, reflective, nicely done. (Report) Reply

  • Bill Cantrell (2/1/2014 1:40:00 PM)

    Very nice poem, poems of nature are the best. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, February 1, 2014

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