Treasure Island

kanav justa

(Shimla)

Uncontainable Nature


leaves when touched by autumn
fades to color grey
none can stop them falling
no prayer would make them stay


you cannot seize the night dark
nor can conquer the glittering day
a skylark when forced to sing
goes swiftly away

Submitted: Saturday, February 01, 2014

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  • Yash Shinde (4/1/2014 11:29:00 PM)

    ......we humans are so powerful, yet some things exist beyond our control, a beautifully crafted piece Kanav, helds such a great message in few lines! ` (Report) Reply

  • Savita Tyagi (3/23/2014 11:24:00 AM)

    We are little against Nature's rhythm. So much we can not change yet we may enjoy while it lasts. Lovely poem to enjoy. Also glad that you enjoyed one of my poem. Thank you so much. (Report) Reply

  • Geetha Jayakumar (2/3/2014 10:00:00 AM)

    A wonderful poem. Beautiful flow of words, with matching rhythm. Great message it carries, many things are beyond our control, in fact nothing is in our control. Loved it. (Report) Reply

  • Marie Shine (2/3/2014 2:41:00 AM)

    I like this beautifully penned poem, very much, dear Kanav. You have captured very artistically the things in nature over which a human being has no control. The poem flows so effortlessly in perfect rhythm and rhyme and is finely expressed. A thought provoking write, which I have so enjoyed reading. Thank you for sharing. I wish you a very blessed and beautiful day to enjoy! Blessings always... (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (2/3/2014 2:04:00 AM)

    We cannot reverse the natural rhythm of life! Though somethings are within man's control, many a happening lies outside his grasp and command! A philosophical write, Kanav! ! (Report) Reply

  • * Sunprincess * (2/1/2014 2:04:00 PM)

    .....a lovely poem with a beautiful metaphor and a great message...
    why so short....I LOVE when you write long poems :)


    Uncontainable Nature

    leaves when touched by autumn
    fades to color grey
    none can stop them falling
    no prayer would make them stay


    you cannot seize the night dark
    nor can conquer the glittering day
    a skylark when forced to sing
    goes swiftly away

    kanav justa (Report) Reply

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