Uncontainable Nature Poem by kanav justa

Uncontainable Nature

Rating: 5.0


leaves when touched by autumn
fades to color grey
none can stop them falling
no prayer would make them stay


you cannot seize the night dark
nor can conquer the glittering day
a skylark when forced to sing
goes swiftly away

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bill Cantrell 01 February 2014

Very nice poem, poems of nature are the best.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 03 February 2014

a lovely poem, reflective, nicely done.

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Valsa George 03 February 2014

We cannot reverse the natural rhythm of life! Though somethings are within man's control, many a happening lies outside his grasp and command! A philosophical write, Kanav! !

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Ruby Mostazir 03 February 2014

No words to say...it just touch my heart! 100 & 10 for it :)

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Kavya . 03 February 2014

a very nice rhyming poem..enjoyed every line..........

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Yash Shinde 01 April 2014

......we humans are so powerful, yet some things exist beyond our control, a beautifully crafted piece Kanav, helds such a great message in few lines! `

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Savita Tyagi 23 March 2014

We are little against Nature's rhythm. So much we can not change yet we may enjoy while it lasts. Lovely poem to enjoy. Also glad that you enjoyed one of my poem. Thank you so much.

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Anthony Burkett 08 February 2014

A wonderful segue from nature's indomitable power to the human condition... well penned.

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Valerie Dohren 04 February 2014

Much beauty in a few lines - well done Kanav.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 04 February 2014

Rightly said......Kanav..........Uncontainable Nature beyond our comprehension....well crafted

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