Valerie Dohren

Silver Star - 3,266 Points (13 January 1947 / Southport)

Under The Laburnum Tree - Poem by Valerie Dohren

(A simple tale)

Under the Laburnum tree
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Comments about Under The Laburnum Tree by Valerie Dohren

  • Rookie - 112 Points Robert Beck (10/28/2012 12:47:00 AM)

    A tree as beautiful as your lovely poem. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 14,027 Points * Sunprincess * (9/27/2012 9:31:00 AM)

    wow, so impressive and I love your muse.. :) (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 714 Points Sally Plumb Plumb (4/14/2012 3:01:00 AM)

    A touching write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 171 Points Richard D. Remler (4/13/2012 4:35:00 PM)

    Oh the tales these trees could tell if we knew how to listen. A beautiful but sad poem. penned with skill. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,755 Points Saiom Shriver (4/5/2012 7:33:00 PM)

    released from the bars of the rib cage
    ... a beautiful and powerful poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 347 Points Danny Draper (3/18/2012 8:26:00 AM)

    Unrequited love, sad but released to hopefully the sanctuary of a more loving garden. A lovely poem. Which species of Laburnum, L chinese? (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Karen Deeks (3/18/2012 3:13:00 AM)

    A beautiful passage through, time love and life experiences in a place chosen for it's relevance for she... Lovely piece Val.... Thanks Karen (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 96 Points Robert Green (3/17/2012 5:58:00 PM)

    as always Val, a great write, a great poem :) (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,811 Points Diane Hine (3/16/2012 7:00:00 PM)

    This probably sounds nuts, but I just sang this lovely poem to myself. Someone should write a beautiful melody to accompany it. (Report) Reply








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